Today's prompts (the story starter in bold at the beginning of the story below) and the picture prompt are from Siv Maria.
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For starters, in the twelve years of her life she remembered and the four she did not, she had a home, a town, a place she belonged to. The sun shone upon acres of dark green, her friends chased her around trees in the orchard, limber girls giggling and squealing, faltering in their long black habits, but not falling, as they ran up the hillside, hair flying from their plaits come undone.
Girls, apples are sinful fruit, the nuns said, and as she'd run among the low-hanging fruit, as always, she'd imagined them as little monsters with sharp teeth and frothing tongue. Apples, and men, girls, keep away from both, and you have nothing to fear. She had laughed, as the voice of the matron rang in her head, and she wondered about the boy who kept staring at her as she walked from one lesson to another, and he picked apples or swept the yard, the gardener's new assistant.
But that was yesterday.
If apples were sinful, what were these men who had her bound?
She stumbled on, her hair in her eyes, till they caught a movement in the trees, a furtive, bird-like thing that followed her through the hillside forest. She darted glances at it, till she glimpsed the face of that gardener's boy-- grimy, determined, undeniably reassuring.
Perhaps, something remained of her earlier life after all. Changed, it is true, but something she could go back to. Maybe not all men were sinful.

If you liked this story you might like some of the stories I wrote for my A to Z last year.
Blogging from A to Z Challenge Reflections Posts of 2012 will start on Monday May 7th. The Linky list will go up on that day so you can enter the link for that post on the list.

Like to know the rest of the story of this one.
ReplyDeleteI really like this one. I want to know what comes next too! Cool photo to go along with it.
ReplyDeleteI agree, I want to know what happens next. That picture scares me though. lol
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ReplyDeleteThat apple is quite scary.
I see you put last years stories into book form. Will you be doing the same with this years?
Susanne
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Good story link for the picture prompt. I, too, would like to have known how this one ends :)
ReplyDeleteInteresting and thought provoking...very nice indeed.
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That apple pic gave me an "Audrey 2" from Little Shop of Horrors moment. Dug the story.
ReplyDeleteYup. Good Story.
ReplyDeleteAwesome story, scary picture. Hope to meet in KL sometime. Fareeda
ReplyDeleteTerrifying photo and a good story to match it! Thanks for stopping by my blog.
ReplyDeleteLaura
A to Z of Immortals, Myths & Legends
i couldn't hardly look at that apple--great writing--this is not good-bye!
ReplyDeleteChilling piece. And the pix rocked too. Well done. I really enjoyed reading your FF pieces. :)
ReplyDeleteGreat read! I enjoyed the Xavier one too!
ReplyDeleteJust stopping by to thank you for hosting the A to Z Challenge. It was a great experience for me, thank you.
ReplyDeleteThat photo is so awesome.
ReplyDeleteNow that's one scary picture. The story made me think if I were in this girl's place I'd be thinking, 'If only I knew.'
ReplyDeleteGreat post, it made me really want to know what happened yesterday, and what is going to happen next! :)
ReplyDeleteWow! Frightening picture but great story! I'm wondering what will become of her? Will the gardener's new assistant become her knight in shining armour?
ReplyDeleteThat photo is mesmerizing and imaginative.
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